Comments

Second cut:

-I think that the the shot that is different to the other video doesn't suit the storyline 

-It doesn't go with the flow and I don't like the way Xenia moves her head

-This sot is kind of out of order and doesn't suit the scene

-I don't think it looks good because the mask doesn't look good on Xenia's face and it is too much of a close up, also I thought that Xenia supposedly should be standing in the same place but the shot with the mask on is closer so it doesn't match the previous shot.

-I don't think it links with the previous or the next shot

Third cut:

-I think this looks better because it links with the shot that comes after this one

-After watching the other video this shot makes more sense, if you know what I mean

-I think that this shot is much better and Xenia looks so much better like this too, also I like the movements 

-This shot is much more interesting

-Gives a better atmosphere to the video 

After I got this feedback it is quite obvious what audience like so I have decided to listen to people who saw both of my videos and my decision would be to make the third cut my final video.